FLYING HOPES

Tuesday, December 26, 2006

MIGHTY OCEAN

Oh! Mighty ocean what happened to your mood?
Why you have become so much rude?
We know your powers, and so we pray,
You need not show that in such a horrible way!
Just in a moment you wiped away lives,
There were children, husbands and wives!
There were cows, dogs and cats,
The master lost all, his possession and pets!
You cheated the fishermen, who depended on you,
Now where they will go? They don’t have a clue!
You can do that again, that is a fact,
But please try to give us little time to react!

(** written on 30th dec 04 )
After two years, the sufferers of tsunami are still struggling to find pace of their lives....May God help them to win their fight with life.....

17 Comments:

  • Amazing way to pay tribute...

    Season's greetings and a happy new year to you and your family
    CHeers

    By Blogger Dawn, at 26 December, 2006  

  • I came by to say ~ Hello my dear...its New Year and whats new happening at your end :)
    Hope to see a post soon ;)
    Cheers

    By Blogger Dawn....सेहर, at 04 January, 2007  

  • Hi Dawn!!thanks a lot.
    everthing is fine at my end..
    busy with my family...will come up with something soon!

    By Blogger rachana, at 05 January, 2007  

  • hello rachanaji....happy new year..may this year shower more and more happiness in your life..

    kya hua? no blog update.

    By Blogger nabeel, at 07 January, 2007  

  • Hi Rachana,

    I liked the poem even though it is a bit homocentric...

    Cheers!

    By Blogger abhay k, at 25 January, 2007  

  • Visiting ur blog for the first time..

    The poem is rather simple and good. But dont blame the Ocean alone.. there are things that man has done to pull her into the rage..

    By Blogger Jasim, at 25 January, 2007  

  • @ nabeel, thank you so much!
    kuchch nahee huaa,hindi me likh rahee hoon isiliye ab yanhaa nahee likh paa rahee.

    @ abhay, thanks for your veiws..

    @ jasim, thanks for visit and your comment..may be man too has to do with all this..

    By Blogger rachana, at 26 January, 2007  

  • Hi rachna,

    My condolences are with family of victims.
    That was a good poem.
    Keep it up.

    By Blogger Abhishek Upadhyay, at 13 February, 2007  

  • Happy Valentine's Day dear...though one doesnt need this one day to express but it gives an opportunity ;)
    Cheers

    By Blogger Dawn....सेहर, at 13 February, 2007  

  • @ abhishek, thanks a lot for your comment.

    @ dawn, thanks a lot! Let me take this opportunity to wish you many more 'Lovely' days in Your life!

    By Blogger rachana, at 14 February, 2007  

  • long time no see (on this blog!)

    By Blogger Ashish Gupta, at 21 February, 2007  

  • you have always impressed me with your poems...and you did once more...

    By Blogger vatsal, at 27 February, 2007  

  • Opening your Blog after a long time...Another gem of a write up from the stable of Great Rachana!!!

    Where have you gone??? No entry in 2007??? Pray that is not your New year resolution.Hope you start writing soon!!

    By Blogger panini03, at 12 March, 2007  

  • Thanks for you work and have a good week.

    By Blogger david santos, at 08 April, 2007  

  • Rachna ji...aap kaheen nazar nahi aati kya baat hai ...sab kheriyat?

    By Blogger Dawn....सेहर, at 17 April, 2007  

  • @ ashish, hmmm I am back!!

    @ vatsal, thanks for your kind words! do come again!

    @ panini, thanks a lot for your nice words!
    No, this is not my new year resolution!

    @ david, thank you for drping by..

    @ dawn, mai bilkul khairiyat se hu! thodi si wyast hu bas...

    By Blogger rachana, at 03 May, 2007  

  • Very well written...

    By Blogger samikshya, at 26 March, 2008  

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