MIGHTY OCEAN
Oh! Mighty ocean what happened to your mood?
Why you have become so much rude?
We know your powers, and so we pray,
You need not show that in such a horrible way!
Just in a moment you wiped away lives,
There were children, husbands and wives!
There were cows, dogs and cats,
The master lost all, his possession and pets!
You cheated the fishermen, who depended on you,
Now where they will go? They don’t have a clue!
You can do that again, that is a fact,
But please try to give us little time to react!
(** written on 30th dec 04 )
After two years, the sufferers of tsunami are still struggling to find pace of their lives....May God help them to win their fight with life.....
Why you have become so much rude?
We know your powers, and so we pray,
You need not show that in such a horrible way!
Just in a moment you wiped away lives,
There were children, husbands and wives!
There were cows, dogs and cats,
The master lost all, his possession and pets!
You cheated the fishermen, who depended on you,
Now where they will go? They don’t have a clue!
You can do that again, that is a fact,
But please try to give us little time to react!
(** written on 30th dec 04 )
After two years, the sufferers of tsunami are still struggling to find pace of their lives....May God help them to win their fight with life.....
posted by rachana at
1:12 AM
16 Comments:
Amazing way to pay tribute...
Season's greetings and a happy new year to you and your family
CHeers
By
Dawn, at 26 December, 2006
I came by to say ~ Hello my dear...its New Year and whats new happening at your end :)
Hope to see a post soon ;)
Cheers
By
Dawn, at 04 January, 2007
Hi Dawn!!thanks a lot.
everthing is fine at my end..
busy with my family...will come up with something soon!
By
rachana, at 05 January, 2007
hello rachanaji....happy new year..may this year shower more and more happiness in your life..
kya hua? no blog update.
By
Nabeel, at 07 January, 2007
Hi Rachana,
I liked the poem even though it is a bit homocentric...
Cheers!
By
White Square, at 25 January, 2007
Visiting ur blog for the first time..
The poem is rather simple and good. But dont blame the Ocean alone.. there are things that man has done to pull her into the rage..
By
Never Ask., at 25 January, 2007
@ nabeel, thank you so much!
kuchch nahee huaa,hindi me likh rahee hoon isiliye ab yanhaa nahee likh paa rahee.
@ abhay, thanks for your veiws..
@ jasim, thanks for visit and your comment..may be man too has to do with all this..
By
rachana, at 26 January, 2007
Hi rachna,
My condolences are with family of victims.
That was a good poem.
Keep it up.
By
Abhishek Upadhyay, at 13 February, 2007
Happy Valentine's Day dear...though one doesnt need this one day to express but it gives an opportunity ;)
Cheers
By
Dawn, at 13 February, 2007
@ abhishek, thanks a lot for your comment.
@ dawn, thanks a lot! Let me take this opportunity to wish you many more 'Lovely' days in Your life!
By
rachana, at 14 February, 2007
long time no see (on this blog!)
By
Ashish Gupta, at 21 February, 2007
you have always impressed me with your poems...and you did once more...
By
Unknown, at 27 February, 2007
Thanks for you work and have a good week.
By
david santos, at 08 April, 2007
Rachna ji...aap kaheen nazar nahi aati kya baat hai ...sab kheriyat?
By
Dawn, at 17 April, 2007
@ ashish, hmmm I am back!!
@ vatsal, thanks for your kind words! do come again!
@ panini, thanks a lot for your nice words!
No, this is not my new year resolution!
@ david, thank you for drping by..
@ dawn, mai bilkul khairiyat se hu! thodi si wyast hu bas...
By
rachana, at 03 May, 2007
Very well written...
By
Samikshya, at 26 March, 2008
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