FLYING HOPES

Monday, July 03, 2006


FIGHT...........

Life has her own ways, and I have mine,
She drags me to dark, but I will shine!!

She wants me to be a puppet- deaf and dumb,
But as always I refuse to succumb!!

As per her rules, she wants me to live,
At time she cheats, that’s what I believe!!

With my plans, she likes to play game,
When I fail she doesn’t take the blame!!

I will win or will it be she?
I have to wait, I have to see!!

From dawn to dusk,
From dusk to dawn,
My fight will be on,
The fight will be on…….

15 Comments:

  • amazing piece.

    By Blogger vikash, at 03 July, 2006  

  • thats soo just like my mom!!!!!!!

    By Blogger Ashish Gupta, at 04 July, 2006  

  • my hearty wishes.....
    U will win the fight!!!!!!!
    grrr8888 poem!!!!!
    :)

    By Blogger ketki, at 04 July, 2006  

  • awww!
    Thx so much for this lovely poem!
    Guess I am in a stage of fighting too and needed to hear these strong words and say to myself "I will fight"!
    Hope u succeed in ur fight!

    By Blogger Ekta, at 04 July, 2006  

  • Hi Rachana,
    Bravo!
    very symmetrical and beautiful...but more importantly the ideas that run through your poem impress me.
    cheers!

    By Blogger abhay k, at 04 July, 2006  

  • must say that was a wonderful poem.

    By Blogger sushant, at 05 July, 2006  

  • Hey Rachna,
    Lovely post!..very inspiring!

    By Blogger Anand, at 05 July, 2006  

  • @vikash,,thanks a lot.

    @ashish,,sh...sh...

    @ketki,,thanks for wishes with sooo much excitement!!

    @ekta,,nice to hear that my poem came at the right time for u..
    wishing u the courage to win ur fight...


    @abhay,,thank you for ur encouraging words...

    @sushant,, thanks v much..

    @anand,,thanks for droping by and appriciation...

    By Blogger rachana, at 05 July, 2006  

  • "you are defeated all the time, yet to victory you are born."

    By Anonymous nabeel, at 06 July, 2006  

  • @nabeel,,"defeaed all the time?? no!,defeated at times ..yes!

    By Blogger rachana, at 07 July, 2006  

  • No defeat is final until you accept it and I know for sure , u will not let it happen. Nice poem.

    By Blogger Neelima Arora, at 07 July, 2006  

  • v well said neelima,, no defeat is final... thanks.

    By Blogger rachana, at 11 July, 2006  

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