IN SEARCH OF LIFE……
Rushing people
Fast pace
Shopping malls
Few old chawls
Shiny cars
Hotels and bars
Divided castes
Frequent blasts
Slum areas
Posh areas
Channel on the gate
Kennel for the pet
Attractive exterior
Rich interior
Egos, ambitions
Passion, fashions
Busy days
Clocked schedules
Even 'fun' is for sale
In the ‘fares’
No spare time
But who cares?
A helping maid
Sleeping pills on the bed!
Not mine, nor yours
Perhaps every body’s case
We all are running
with this madness!!
Television and computer
Two “people” around
Those are the ones
Who make the sound!
Closed windows
And closed doors
Knock- knock- knock
Any LIFE is there??
A deadly SILENCE appears!!!!!
(FLASH BACK…)
Chirping birds
Cawing crows
Morning walks
Evening talks
Stories of grandma
Care of grandpa
Everyday meetings
Nothing-to-do sittings
No hobby class
Always free
To time pass!
Lots of games
Lots of choices
Lots of arguments
Lots of noise!
Lots of clay
Cousins to play!
Patient dad
And strict mom!
Few schools
With dedicated teachers
The priceless fun
Of learning with nature!
No competition
No frustration
Lots of tolerance
And the affection!
No one was resistant
To give and to share
Lots of love and
Lots of care!
Once “LIFE” lived there
LIFE lived there!!!!
Rushing people
Fast pace
Shopping malls
Few old chawls
Shiny cars
Hotels and bars
Divided castes
Frequent blasts
Slum areas
Posh areas
Channel on the gate
Kennel for the pet
Attractive exterior
Rich interior
Egos, ambitions
Passion, fashions
Busy days
Clocked schedules
Even 'fun' is for sale
In the ‘fares’
No spare time
But who cares?
A helping maid
Sleeping pills on the bed!
Not mine, nor yours
Perhaps every body’s case
We all are running
with this madness!!
Television and computer
Two “people” around
Those are the ones
Who make the sound!
Closed windows
And closed doors
Knock- knock- knock
Any LIFE is there??
A deadly SILENCE appears!!!!!
(FLASH BACK…)
Chirping birds
Cawing crows
Morning walks
Evening talks
Stories of grandma
Care of grandpa
Everyday meetings
Nothing-to-do sittings
No hobby class
Always free
To time pass!
Lots of games
Lots of choices
Lots of arguments
Lots of noise!
Lots of clay
Cousins to play!
Patient dad
And strict mom!
Few schools
With dedicated teachers
The priceless fun
Of learning with nature!
No competition
No frustration
Lots of tolerance
And the affection!
No one was resistant
To give and to share
Lots of love and
Lots of care!
Once “LIFE” lived there
LIFE lived there!!!!
12 Comments:
Well,thats really true,something which i was saying in my post too:) Wish we belonged to such life past when it was simple yet beautiful.
thanks for dropping by my blog.
By Alapana, at 31 July, 2006
hi alapana,
Yes these thoughts were in my mind for some time but after reading ur blog and one more post abt childhood of 80s i had strong urge to put them here....
By rachana, at 31 July, 2006
ohh wow!
Thats a beautiful poem and so well said..sums up the truth in all of our lives...guess most of us miss the innocent days of our lives where everything was simple and sweet!
By Ekta, at 02 August, 2006
hi rachana,
really true. and hats off for your way of writing.i like the way you focus on life.
By Anonymous, at 02 August, 2006
Beautiful...... creation
By Anonymous, at 02 August, 2006
aaj aur kal ke badlaav ko achchi tarah cover kiya hai aapne apni poem mein !
By Manish Kumar, at 02 August, 2006
awesome piece!!
summarises life so beautifully!
By Anand, at 02 August, 2006
grrrr888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
man........ u've brought out the jist of life in ur "kavyarachana"!
keep writting!!!!!!!!!
:)
By ketki, at 03 August, 2006
Hi Rachana Mausi,
Thats a good one, wish I could introduce Tara to more of mother nature out here,
Cheers,
Sujata
By Anonymous, at 03 August, 2006
@panini,, thanks a lot...
@ekta,,thanks and ys simplicity is missing these days!!
@nabeel,,thanks for the appiciation..
@deepak,, thank you..
@manish,,dhanyawad!
@anand,,glad..that you like the poem..
@ketki,,thank you!!!!!!
@sujata,,nice to see u here.love to tara...
By rachana, at 04 August, 2006
Baap re aap kya kya likh leti hain...
This seems like list of things to be purchased from local shop....:P
By Abhishek Upadhyay, at 05 August, 2006
hi abhishek,
there are things in the list you wont get in any shop in the world, no matter how much money you are ready to spend...
anyways, thanx for your honest comment.
By rachana, at 05 August, 2006
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