Thursday, July 20, 2006

FREE ? AM I ??

I just started to breathe
and they closed the window on air..
I just started to see
and they put a blindfold on my eyes..
I just started to hear
and they banned the source of sound..
I just started to speak
and they want me to be quiet..

I am not allowed to be my own
to speak, to hear or to see
and they say I am free!!!

Will I be given a chance to listen?
a chance to tell?
Or I have to go back to my shell??


  • aahh!So finally its done!
    i tried so hard to reach ur blogand finally i m here!
    the poems really gud!

    By Blogger ketki, at 21 July, 2006  

  • hey nice poem yar...

    By Blogger Dh@v@!, at 21 July, 2006  

  • Very nice, keep it up

    By Anonymous deepak, at 22 July, 2006  

  • hey wow,
    really touching post!
    Guess it depicts the state of most women in india who are yet to be free in the true sense!

    By Blogger Anand, at 23 July, 2006  

  • @ ketki, thanks for comenting while u tried hard for it!

    @ dhaval, deepak,
    @ anand, I must say you got it right.....

    By Blogger rachana, at 24 July, 2006  

  • awesome piece!!
    Hope to see a day soon when woman can breathe and see and listen to eveything they want...when we truely understand the meaning of freedom!

    By Blogger Ekta, at 25 July, 2006  

  • You ahve beautifully depicted the problem of comman man in todays world where power is wielded by few people.

    By Blogger Abhishek Upadhyay, at 26 July, 2006  

  • so at least for now things are back to normal as far as blogs are concerned.
    nicely written indeed !

    By Blogger Manish, at 26 July, 2006  

  • Have you written this to reflect the recent bloggers block where blogspot and other sites were banned? That or otherwise, its very nice.

    By Anonymous Hiren, at 26 July, 2006  

  • ekta,, thanks.. things are improving.....we can hope for better..
    abhishek,, thank you..
    manish,, ys it seems!
    and thanks for appriciation..
    hiren,,ys i wanted to address that issue too with some other more important issues... thank you..

    By Blogger rachana, at 27 July, 2006  

  • Very interesting...Wondering what prompted you to think in those lines!!!! Keep it up!!!

    By Blogger panini03, at 28 July, 2006  

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