FLYING HOPES

Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Aatankwadiyon ke liye ek sandesh

Chalo chalein nav yug ki oar
Mana tumme rosh bahut hai, nai khoon ka josh bahut hai.
Gusse ko ab chchodo bhi tum, lakshyon ko ab modo bhi tum.
Thamo nav jeevan ki dor.
Chalo….
Mana, tumne bahut hai khoya, kshamta se kuch kam hi paaya.

Chchoota jo,wo sab paa loge, sahi raah par agar chaloge.
Dekho aayi nai bhor,
Chalo…
Kitne kashton ko tum sahte? Khud ko hi tum chchalte rahte.
Kyun jillat ka jeevan jeete? Andheron me tum kyun rahte.
Dekho ab sooraj ki oar.
Chalo..
Ham jaise, tum bhi aye ho, tum bhi manu ke hi jaye ho.
Ham jaise adhikar tumhare, tum ho ham sabke hi pyare.
Bandh karo yuddhon ka shor,
Chalo..
Manavta ki sakh ko dekho, khud ke andar zhank ke dekho.
Dushta vicharon ko tum tyaago, galti ki to maafi maango.
Kyun darte? Jaise ho chor,
Chalo…
Zagdon se kya haasil hoga? Manav ka hi khoon bahega.
Ma ke sheesh ko aab mat zhukao, shakti ko mat vyarth gavao.
Sahi disha me lagao jor,
Chalo…

17 Comments:

  • wow... you have amazing grasp over both hindi and english...your verse proves that.
    anyway, it is quite tragic what has happened in bombay...makes me want to scream and lash out...

    By Blogger xanjukta, at 12 July, 2006  

  • Hats off to you buddy… nice creation…
    Hope ki woh terrorist log ye padhe aur kisi ek ka hriday parivartan ho jaye…

    By Blogger Dh@v@!, at 13 July, 2006  

  • Very good.....

    By Anonymous deepak, at 13 July, 2006  

  • Pata nahin inka man badlega ya nahin :(. Sabse pehle inhein gumraah karne waalon ki nakel kasni padegi. bina jad par chot kiye huye achche phool ki umeed kaise rakhein?

    By Blogger Manish, at 13 July, 2006  

  • well well lets hope some terrorist read them..Well written anyways

    By Blogger MYSTIC MONK, at 14 July, 2006  

  • hi xanjukta, thanks for ur kind words....
    @ dhaval, thank you so much!! han hope to ki hi ja sakti hai...
    @ deepak, thanks!
    @ manish, han thik hi kaha aapane! @ mystic monk, thanks...

    By Blogger rachana, at 14 July, 2006  

  • save lebanon...save our humanity

    By Blogger Haider Droubi, at 16 July, 2006  

  • nice one :)

    By Blogger Ankit, at 17 July, 2006  

  • bahut hee sahi baat kahi hai...umeed hai acche acchon ke palle ye baat pare...lekin inse pehale inhein gumraah karne walon ko sabak seekhana chahiye...
    daad kabool farmayein

    Cheers

    By Blogger Dawn....सेहर, at 18 July, 2006  

  • Its a really good poem.

    By Blogger Raj, at 18 July, 2006  

  • @ haider.it's very painful....
    @ ankit,, thank you.
    @ dawn,,, bahut shukriya ji!!
    @ raj,,, thank you so much....

    By Blogger rachana, at 18 July, 2006  

  • Agar ek bhi Aatakwadi aapki is kavita ko sunkar badal jaaye tho yeh aapki jeet hogi.Isi tarah aapke ache vichar logon tak pahunchavo.Ho sakta hai ki aapki kalam ki shakti ke aage Aatankwadi apne bandook rakh dain.

    By Anonymous Narayanan, at 18 July, 2006  

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  • good one ,

    By Blogger sumeett, at 20 August, 2006  

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